Very nice like were this is going lots of potential but can also easily be ruined. Good luck author, keep dem chapters comming đ ......................................
Noble_Siegfried
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LIKEHmm things like relationship with his mother(who is a real b*tch), who he marries and how many, if u make him a beta character e.t.c.
Noble_Siegfried:If I may ask, how could I ruin it? I only ask so I can avoid doing such things. Anyway, thanks for the review.
I mean, she's a real b*tch to everyone but her children. So MC is lucky, and will have a semi-positive relationship with her for a while. He won't marry for a long while, he'll mainly be sleeping with hot chicks before moving on. Don't want to tie him down to anyone too early. This won't be harem, either. Just doesn't fit with the story. Especially when you think about how the most beautiful women (Sansa, Daenerys, Margaery, etc) are also very influential and have a lot of power behind them (most of the north for Sansa, Dragons, the Unsullied, and the Dothraki, for Daenerys, and the Tyrell's, one of the major houses, for Margaery) so I doubt harem is possible. Also, what is your definition of a beta character?
Kurosis:Hmm things like relationship with his mother(who is a real b*tch), who he marries and how many, if u make him a beta character e.t.c.
Sounds good cant wait read more. My definition would be subservient, weak willed, no pride, wont stand up for himself, having women dominate him e.t.c
Noble_Siegfried:I mean, she's a real b*tch to everyone but her children. So MC is lucky, and will have a semi-positive relationship with her for a while. He won't marry for a long while, he'll mainly be sleeping with hot chicks before moving on. Don't want to tie him down to anyone too early. This won't be harem, either. Just doesn't fit with the story. Especially when you think about how the most beautiful women (Sansa, Daenerys, Margaery, etc) are also very influential and have a lot of power behind them (most of the north for Sansa, Dragons, the Unsullied, and the Dothraki, for Daenerys, and the Tyrell's, one of the major houses, for Margaery) so I doubt harem is possible. Also, what is your definition of a beta character?
He'll have pride and he'll stand up for himself but he won't be a dick head because of it. Weak-willed will be a relative term honestly. Not in a serious setting but maybe in a jokey setting where he's just messing about. Even then, there's no need to be too stuck up against women - he is from our time, you know? He doesn't share the same kind of values of women like the rest of Westeros.
Kurosis:Sounds good cant wait read more. My definition would be subservient, weak willed, no pride, wont stand up for himself, having women dominate him e.t.c
Love the way the story is going and hope the mc will grow after the upcoming war. Love seeing mcâs change with time not just becoming more powerful but become stronger in character Keep up the amazing work đđ˝
Noble_Siegfried:He'll have pride and he'll stand up for himself but he won't be a dick head because of it. Weak-willed will be a relative term honestly. Not in a serious setting but maybe in a jokey setting where he's just messing about. Even then, there's no need to be too stuck up against women - he is from our time, you know? He doesn't share the same kind of values of women like the rest of Westeros.