Review Detail of hartpeler in THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

as an author myself. i liked this book's concept. the world building and so on, almost zero infodumps. but the only issue I had is the punctuation. don't choke your reader by ignoring the punctuation. and the rest. it's all good include the grammar that I could accept it since it's readable and understandable by myself.