This is hard to read. The story itself has potential, but the grammar, spelling, and overall continuity of the story needs work. Id recommend getting someone to help edit your chapters or spending more time editing them yourself. Editing your work is how you improve as a writer, so i encourage you to do so. Till then sorry but dropped.
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LIKEIt truly is, because some words "look the same" which destroys the sentence and paragraph, ultimately the whole story in total. We need to read with an actual understanding of what they are talking about or just details about the background and the plot in general. Otherwise, we can drop it due to be unable to read with an actual train of thought where you say" Ah, that makes actual sense." but no, not here I presume.
I dropped it at like ch 10 so I'm not actually sure but before I dropped it I did take a peek at the most recent ch at the time and I'm pretty sure he was in human form, which is really par for the course for these kinds of webnovels.
Hitendra_Singh_1001:does he take human form