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uncledavie
uncledavieLv133yruncledavie

This is hard to read. The story itself has potential, but the grammar, spelling, and overall continuity of the story needs work. Id recommend getting someone to help edit your chapters or spending more time editing them yourself. Editing your work is how you improve as a writer, so i encourage you to do so. Till then sorry but dropped.

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THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

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Grogorg
GrogorgLv13Grogorg

Thanks for saving me time, sir. Readability is an important quality baseline, so many Authors try to skip that step and try riding on their fantasies. So damn annoying that Webnovel keeps recommending these works that are basically an insult to the reader.

TheLastAuditor
TheLastAuditorLv3TheLastAuditor

It truly is, because some words "look the same" which destroys the sentence and paragraph, ultimately the whole story in total. We need to read with an actual understanding of what they are talking about or just details about the background and the plot in general. Otherwise, we can drop it due to be unable to read with an actual train of thought where you say" Ah, that makes actual sense." but no, not here I presume.

Hitendra_Singh_1001
Hitendra_Singh_1001Lv4Hitendra_Singh_1001

does he take human form

uncledavie
uncledavieLv13uncledavie

I dropped it at like ch 10 so I'm not actually sure but before I dropped it I did take a peek at the most recent ch at the time and I'm pretty sure he was in human form, which is really par for the course for these kinds of webnovels.

Hitendra_Singh_1001:does he take human form