Review Detail of Reevoo in Game of Thrones: The Golden Lion

It's really hard to read... Full of misinformation and even the Lannisters castle is misspelled, consistently. It's CASTERLY Rock, not Castral, author. The plot progress far too quickly and no real development of the protagonist or his siblings. Also, a random lion is thrown in for no reason... Idk, it's just difficult to keep reading, I've read other stories here that had just as bad grammar but this is, personally, very hard to get through.