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Tjani_e
Tjani_eLv104yr
2020-10-20 15:36

Here a fanart from me, What I like about your work: a)Haruka(mc) is relatable and her dialogue is simply hilarious?! b)The author makes a fascinating job in MLs' pasts and personalities on how they become yandere. Most people seem to cut short of yandere tendencies so they look the same to me. But this author doesn't make the same slip. Nuh-uh. Which placed the author, Queen in my eyes c)Most otome games have hidden chara(HC) which include this game mc isekaied. So, this give thrilled to mc and us, reader since mc don't finish the game. This gave us a dose of paranoia to doubt everyone in MC radar as HC. It likes playing "among us" but in the novel. d)The world-building is good I guess(?) Well, it otome game which most focus on capture targets and love development. What do you expect? At least, it makes some sort of sense since it was a modern high school Japan drama(that don't have mafia, secret societies, lab rat experiment, magic, quirk and superheroes/magical girl)

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SkyHighLimits
SkyHighLimitsAuthor

Omg, thats so cute!!! I love it! Thank you! If you don’t mind, could I use your fanart as my profile pic? XD Also, thank you for the review (and compliments uwu)! I’m glad you enjoy my novel! <3

Tjani_e
Tjani_eLv10

Oh my, it an honour! I already pleased that you love it. Here I am, feeling that my 'Haru' seem too aesthetic than Haru in the novel. But I push it out of my mind since Haru is originally the heroine in the game. Hence, it reasonable for her to be bishoujo. It just don't feel right with her temperament from my belief.

SkyHighLimits
SkyHighLimitsAuthor

Haha, thats right. As the heroine of a dating sim, she has to be cute, even if her personality doesn’t exactly match it. XD So, it was a good idea to go for the bishoujo visuals! :)

Tjani_e:Oh my, it an honour! I already pleased that you love it. Here I am, feeling that my 'Haru' seem too aesthetic than Haru in the novel. But I push it out of my mind since Haru is originally the heroine in the game. Hence, it reasonable for her to be bishoujo. It just don't feel right with her temperament from my belief.
nari_9158
nari_9158Lv2

i love the fanart! that’s exactly what i pictured her looking like!! :O

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I gotta say, this story really checks off all my boxes. I’ve been looking for a female -> male crossdressing story(why are these so rare?!) and I’ve not been disappointed yet. Other than just happening to be a gender bender(this just happened to be on my list of things I wanted to read), the story has a lot going for it. The pacing is pretty good overall: not too fast, not too slow. The different events of the story happen at the right times without seeming forced. Character: now this? This is a lot of fun. The yandere character has always been fascinating to me, similar to how Haruka felt at the beginning of the story. Their pasts and personalities are usually interesting to watch unfold. This book more so than others because the MC actually goes and starts ‘fixing’ them. Kinda. She’s getting started on Ryuu at least. Tatsuya’s got the potential to be fixed as well. Buuut Yuu’s kinda a lost cause so far... *Cough* anyways! World building is the next topic! It’s what you’d expect from an otome game story, so not much I can say here. The story takes place in ‘our world’ (it’s not a fantasy world), so there’s not much to really write. Despite that, or really because of that, the world it takes place in just kinda makes sense, ya know? It’s not like some crazy fantasy world with crazy magic systems that get really complicated. Don’t get me wrong, those can be great and I actually really love them! They’re just hard to write and get into sometimes. Writing Style: this is beautiful. I love the way Author-san writes! It has a clean flow from each sentence/paragraph/chapter. The story flows and Haruka’s thoughts and reactions are just a blast to read! Overall: 10/10. If or when Author-san decides to write another story, I will almost definitely be on board with it.

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