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Sphell
SphellLv44yr
2020-05-10 14:41

I gotta say, this story really checks off all my boxes. I’ve been looking for a female -> male crossdressing story(why are these so rare?!) and I’ve not been disappointed yet. Other than just happening to be a gender bender(this just happened to be on my list of things I wanted to read), the story has a lot going for it. The pacing is pretty good overall: not too fast, not too slow. The different events of the story happen at the right times without seeming forced. Character: now this? This is a lot of fun. The yandere character has always been fascinating to me, similar to how Haruka felt at the beginning of the story. Their pasts and personalities are usually interesting to watch unfold. This book more so than others because the MC actually goes and starts ‘fixing’ them. Kinda. She’s getting started on Ryuu at least. Tatsuya’s got the potential to be fixed as well. Buuut Yuu’s kinda a lost cause so far... *Cough* anyways! World building is the next topic! It’s what you’d expect from an otome game story, so not much I can say here. The story takes place in ‘our world’ (it’s not a fantasy world), so there’s not much to really write. Despite that, or really because of that, the world it takes place in just kinda makes sense, ya know? It’s not like some crazy fantasy world with crazy magic systems that get really complicated. Don’t get me wrong, those can be great and I actually really love them! They’re just hard to write and get into sometimes. Writing Style: this is beautiful. I love the way Author-san writes! It has a clean flow from each sentence/paragraph/chapter. The story flows and Haruka’s thoughts and reactions are just a blast to read! Overall: 10/10. If or when Author-san decides to write another story, I will almost definitely be on board with it.

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SkyHighLimits
SkyHighLimitsAuthor

Omg, wowie wow wow. Thank you so much for the in-depth review! You can’t believe how happy I am to read this! I’ll continue to do my best to not let you down! 😤

_eunwa
_eunwaLv4

Lol, this has nothing to do with anything but you know what's even rarer than FL's crossdressing? FL's that are actually smart

Curious_FL
Curious_FLLv3

Ikr I'm a real fan of this one😍😍

Curious_FL
Curious_FLLv3

😍😍

Curious_FL:Ikr I'm a real fan of this one😍😍
rapriyal
rapriyalLv5

i want to ask that its " harem " or not..?

Hands_Rated_E_1
Hands_Rated_E_1Lv3

do you know any other stories pike this?

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ihatenovels
ihatenovelsLv2

Scrolling around for web novels, I was not expecting much from this novel, but I found a jewel in the haystack. I honestly love this novel. It’s so unique and different from the cliched “isekai to an otome game” novel. The writing style is great, only a few typos, the character development is amazing. The author has put in a ton of effort into these characters and the plot. Every time Haru interacts with each of the characters, I always get so excited because I never know what to expect. Their interactions are way better than what I predict, which is very rare. I loved how the author added a “potential love target” because it keeps u guessing about him. Is he really another yandere or is he a normal guy trying to protect the FL? I’m still contemplating whether he’s someone to trust or not. I think it’s cute how the author added the little twist about the FL crossdressing to not attract the love targets, but I honestly think she couldve used another method to not attract them. Not only that, but I feel kinda uncomfortable that the FL’s parents aren’t really there for her, and it isnt really explained why they’re abroad for such a long time. In addition, it’s kinda weird that the FL doesnt really care much about her previous life. Its like she didnt really care about being isekai’d to a new world. Overall, I love this novel. It kinda reminds me of “Death Is The Only Ending For The Villainess”. They are both such a cruel reality, but very unique and twisted... I really like it >:) Keep up the good work author!

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