Review Detail of ThirtE3n in Monstrous Path

Everything that I say is based on my opinion and mine only, with my experience as a reader, and there may be some spoil so read the story first (or at least until chapter 55) and come back later ;) So, I think it's a interesting story with a good idea which need to be kept, but I think some things could be improved in your story author-san : - For the dialogues you could just use "..." rather than = "..." = or * "..." *, it would create an aerial text which would be a lot more enjoyable to read. - The Hydra idea is good, but the fact that each an every head will have an independante consciousness like it's a different beast will be pretty confusing in the future in my opinion (when you revealed the hydra I thought it would be like each head has a brain = parallel thinking and multitasking but still one unique consciousness). Finally, I really think this story could beneficiate having a editor/proofreader because there is a lot of clumsy sentences with misused words or time (even though it doesn't prevent the understanding of the story) but I know that you give it your all so keep up the good work !