Review Detail of Tonyorobsky in Adam Black The Grand Sorcerer
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The grammar need some work. Sometimes you have to decipher what is written. The protagonist is disappointing in 2 ways: He is a reincarnated being with divine ancestry and super magic who knows the plot of HP, even having read fanfics about it. -Yet his foreknowledge is near useless. Events happen the same as canon because the protagonist is a pushover led around by a 11yo. His crush on the girl who lived is forced, and he just became her henchman, stupidly or reluctantly repeating canon mistakes. -With all his power and super equipment, Quirrelmort beat him. Quirrelmort!!! Voldemort is a powerless wraith, Quirrel is an average wizard, and the mc with reinforcement magic, op wand/weapon and op magic lost to him... that’s just bad. His place is in a slice-of-life story, where he can be passive and bystander all he wants.
Adam Black The Grand Sorcerer
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And as I stated before wqueirlmort is a lot stronger than cannon because this is not cannon but a crossover of marvel as well.
Imabethatguy12345:Dude you need to reread it if you really think he best him lol I hate it when people do this stuff
I said that because he had needed to go full Loki. The high speed sneak attack with avatar truck kun should have knocked him out. That’s my opinion😤. At the end of the day, your story your rules. I’ll abide by them even if I disagree (I did read it to the latest update)
Imabethatguy12345:Dude you need to reread it if you really think he best him lol I hate it when people do this stuff