Item: Reincarnated As The Hero Ring
Rating: 2.6
Author: jason_blunder

jason_blunderLv144yr

2020-10-22 18:29

Note to the author, stating what was said or that something happened takes the effect and action out of the story. Details are your friend and will help your story. also have your characters actually speak instead of saying that they spoke about something, this will add life to your story.

Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

ExChaser

4.0

203 Chs

Liked by 3 people

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ExChaserAuthor

Thanks for the advice, it will really help me improve to be better!

4yr

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AeternabilisLv14

Alright story, basically skipped all the chapters... I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it. I mean the hero he travels with is already in the level 70s.... like wtf? We see no progression from the mc. It's like he is a little voice just floating along with the hero... I was waiting practically the whole story so far for the mc to go back to his "owner" the girl. I mean she is a newbie adventurer and is like level 10 or something. There would have been much progression from the mc and his companion then. We would see them grow together with the mc learning more about the world in the travels. He would acc gain levels etc. For me, the first couple of chapters were really weird with the father throwing away the ring to the random-ass happenings after. Then for me the story just becomes nothing. No progression for the mc no growth or anything just an extremely dull story with nothing happening. (for the mc) If the story was about the hero then it would be a bit more interesting but this isn't why I wanted to read the story. I came for the ring mc...

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Reveal spoiler

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ExChaserAuthor

[Updated Author Review] The novel had ended- what can you expect? -Opening (Meme) -Poor Grammar (It's enjoyable only if you can handle it.) -Word Choice (Maybe...) -Characters (Meh...) -World (Meh...) -Ending (Rush...) Why 4 stars then? -Self Encouragement

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ExChaserAuthor

Yes! I'm making my own review... I do know that my writing quality is not good and my word count for every chapter is very short but I do want you guys to understand that I'm quite busy. I just hope that you will keep supporting this story! If you don't like it please leave a feedback below.

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DensyCloudyLv14

This story is very compelling but I have this urge to help the author with his grammar or at least help him proofread this story! This is a great novel but it would be much better with a little more touch of grammatical sense. Author if you’re reading this review, I will 100% proofread your story and fix any grammar errors. If you need extra hands, I’ll bring my buddies over to help!

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khansubhan070Lv4

Never gonna ever recommend this trash to anyone, this guy posts chapter as thin as flimsy as paper (I mean very short chapters) and still takes a lot of time to upload.

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GaminatorLv1

A pretty good read, but the author definitely needs to get an editor to fix the grammar mistakes. The story is nice though and it reminds me of Reincarnated as a Sword.

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Demonshadow639Lv14

I only got to chapter three and while this story has great potential, it is extremely hard to get past the grammar errors. the style of writting Needs Improvement

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Nice starting to the story. A very new concept to write about. Interested to find out the journey of a ring. Do check some grammer mistakes and use apps like grammerly or proaidwriter for help if needed. Be more stable in the updates

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