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khansubhan070
khansubhan070Lv44yr
2020-10-14 23:55

Never gonna ever recommend this trash to anyone, this guy posts chapter as thin as flimsy as paper (I mean very short chapters) and still takes a lot of time to upload.

Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

ExChaser
3.9
203 Chs

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ExChaser
ExChaserAuthor

Finally someone had said this kind of review! I had already prepare why my chapter is so short and have a huge time gap. 1.Why the chapter were short? -What do you expect as I'm a lazy author. -Why I had to create a longer chapter if there no one will read them. Cause to be honest I never expected my story would get some attention now. -I will tell you that I had only one loyal reader back then that was @winder567. -Beside creating a longer chapter would take many hours. Do you know how it felt when you finally finish it, then post it here and no one see it or comment it. It really made my motivation to write down. That's why there so many new authors quit writting or drop their stories. 'So please reader leave a comment in the books you like even though it just one word that is good' 2. Why there were a huge time gap? -I think you should know then reason already. With no one reading this story, I had lost motivation to write and plan to quit writting as it's better to focus on another thing. But I remember that I had one loyal reader that time, I didn't want to let my only loyal reader down so I continue to write even I had lost all the funs in writting. Even with the huge time gap in every chapter, that one reader of mine keep reading it and comment on every chapter. @Winder567, he the reason why I didn't quit writting and how I could be here right now. 3.Conclusion? -I know it shorts but it's free right? -Is my story trash? Well it's depend on the reader. -Thanks for you honest review!

4yr
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Irysss_Novalin
Irysss_NovalinLv3

nahh if trash diffination is short chapter andd longer time updatee then basically yourrr alsooo fuckingg trashh ifff u cant waiittt thenn dhuzzz dontt readdd itttt hohohoho

4yr
noobmaster10
noobmaster10Lv4

world doesn't run with emotions. It was a nice lecture though. let's not talk about grammar or short chapter or late release. but still your novel lacks many thing. First of all you focused on side character and didn't developed main character. Aliss bronze knight and chase who are mc here? there are many things the story lacks but since you are already demotivated i won't say much but if u write half heartily then you should welcome criticism. I rarely drop any novel in middle and I'm in verge of dropping it.

ExChaser:Finally someone had said this kind of review! I had already prepare why my chapter is so short and have a huge time gap. 1.Why the chapter were short? -What do you expect as I'm a lazy author. -Why I had to create a longer chapter if there no one will read them. Cause to be honest I never expected my story would get some attention now. -I will tell you that I had only one loyal reader back then that was @winder567. -Beside creating a longer chapter would take many hours. Do you know how it felt when you finally finish it, then post it here and no one see it or comment it. It really made my motivation to write down. That's why there so many new authors quit writting or drop their stories. 'So please reader leave a comment in the books you like even though it just one word that is good' 2. Why there were a huge time gap? -I think you should know then reason already. With no one reading this story, I had lost motivation to write and plan to quit writting as it's better to focus on another thing. But I remember that I had one loyal reader that time, I didn't want to let my only loyal reader down so I continue to write even I had lost all the funs in writting. Even with the huge time gap in every chapter, that one reader of mine keep reading it and comment on every chapter. @Winder567, he the reason why I didn't quit writting and how I could be here right now. 3.Conclusion? -I know it shorts but it's free right? -Is my story trash? Well it's depend on the reader. -Thanks for you honest review!
4yr
5
ExChaser
ExChaserAuthor

I do welcome criticism, that why I never deleted those one or two-star review as I think the reviewers were right. It's not that I write this story half heartily, I do write the best as I can but know that the earlier chapter wasn't that good, it because I was still learning about writing that time around. On how to make everything better... I was still learning

noobmaster10:world doesn't run with emotions. It was a nice lecture though. let's not talk about grammar or short chapter or late release. but still your novel lacks many thing. First of all you focused on side character and didn't developed main character. Aliss bronze knight and chase who are mc here? there are many things the story lacks but since you are already demotivated i won't say much but if u write half heartily then you should welcome criticism. I rarely drop any novel in middle and I'm in verge of dropping it.
4yr
1
noobmaster10
noobmaster10Lv4

that's good. I know how hard it's to write a chapter and bad rating discourage author Even so, you have to accept all hatred, bad reviews as you receive the love and good reviews. My best regards with you. Make next arc/chapters interesting .

ExChaser:I do welcome criticism, that why I never deleted those one or two-star review as I think the reviewers were right. It's not that I write this story half heartily, I do write the best as I can but know that the earlier chapter wasn't that good, it because I was still learning about writing that time around. On how to make everything better... I was still learning
4yr
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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

Alright story, basically skipped all the chapters... I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it. I mean the hero he travels with is already in the level 70s.... like wtf? We see no progression from the mc. It's like he is a little voice just floating along with the hero... I was waiting practically the whole story so far for the mc to go back to his "owner" the girl. I mean she is a newbie adventurer and is like level 10 or something. There would have been much progression from the mc and his companion then. We would see them grow together with the mc learning more about the world in the travels. He would acc gain levels etc. For me, the first couple of chapters were really weird with the father throwing away the ring to the random-ass happenings after. Then for me the story just becomes nothing. No progression for the mc no growth or anything just an extremely dull story with nothing happening. (for the mc) If the story was about the hero then it would be a bit more interesting but this isn't why I wanted to read the story. I came for the ring mc...

4yr

AnimeReader_player
AnimeReader_playerLv5

Reveal spoiler

3yr
ExChaser
ExChaserAuthor

[Updated Author Review] The novel had ended- what can you expect? -Opening (Meme) -Poor Grammar (It's enjoyable only if you can handle it.) -Word Choice (Maybe...) -Characters (Meh...) -World (Meh...) -Ending (Rush...) Why 4 stars then? -Self Encouragement

3yr
ExChaser
ExChaserAuthor

Yes! I'm making my own review... I do know that my writing quality is not good and my word count for every chapter is very short but I do want you guys to understand that I'm quite busy. I just hope that you will keep supporting this story! If you don't like it please leave a feedback below.

4yr
DensyCloudy
DensyCloudyLv14

This story is very compelling but I have this urge to help the author with his grammar or at least help him proofread this story! This is a great novel but it would be much better with a little more touch of grammatical sense. Author if you’re reading this review, I will 100% proofread your story and fix any grammar errors. If you need extra hands, I’ll bring my buddies over to help!

4yr
Gaminator
GaminatorLv1

A pretty good read, but the author definitely needs to get an editor to fix the grammar mistakes. The story is nice though and it reminds me of Reincarnated as a Sword.

4yr
SSSRank_Blob
SSSRank_BlobLv1

0w0 I felt really bad that a nice story like this was sitting here rotting with no reviews, so I rated it! 1. Writing quality is really good (as stated above) 2. Stability of updates is good, if you count out the occasional few day gap. 3. Story development is ok, but I think you can do better 4. Character design is a hard one, but I personally like the ring & stuff so yeah. 5. I don't even know what the hell is world background, so no comments on that.

4yr
Demonshadow639
Demonshadow639Lv14

I only got to chapter three and while this story has great potential, it is extremely hard to get past the grammar errors. the style of writting Needs Improvement

4yr
Cruchymonster
CruchymonsterLv14

Nice starting to the story. A very new concept to write about. Interested to find out the journey of a ring. Do check some grammer mistakes and use apps like grammerly or proaidwriter for help if needed. Be more stable in the updates

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