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2021-01-30 04:59

Ok, I've gotten to chapter 7 and the author still continues to use incorrect pronouns for the FL. It's destroying my suspension of disbelief, so I can't continue reading this novel. I'll check back next year to see if the author has made corrections. This is gender bender and pronouns help develop the story.

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