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ChuQiao
ChuQiaoLv105yr
2020-01-17 01:12

The story is good but the fl is not my cup of tea. At first when i read about how she had live her life as a boy, i thought she might be someone that strong inside and outside. But she just like any woman out there. Falling in love too easy with ML. And when you think about her character carefully. She's kinda selfish .She make her parent live a risky life by living with fake id. All because she's too emotional about her twin death. I mean it's not like her twin die a tragic death, he die because of illness and a lot of people experience that too. Plus she take advantage of ML kindness. I don't know if this is act of innocent or just plainly ignorant.

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Tinalynge
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Thank you so much for your review! Blossoming Flowers (My Life or Your Memory) is my very first attempt at writing a romance novel - in fact, my very first time writing a modern story, and I can agree that the story has some faults. I have begun another series named Money-Grubbing Lover, where the main character is a lot more independant, strong and steady. She is also older and more mature. It is not a **** setting but more of an ***** one. If you want to please try it out - I try to upload 1 chapter a day of that novel. Although Blossoming Flowers (My Life or Your Memory) has some faults in the fact that I did not plan out the character too much and just wrote whatever came to mind, I will work hard to finish it. I genuinely value your opinion, it helps me improve my writing, so thank you for your honest review!

ChuQiao
ChuQiaoLv10

Dear... Thank you for accept ur reader personal taste. I will read your other novel incase i found the character that i like.Keep writing a good story for us. Some may not like it, some may like it. Don't worry about that.

Tinalynge:Thank you so much for your review! Blossoming Flowers (My Life or Your Memory) is my very first attempt at writing a romance novel - in fact, my very first time writing a modern story, and I can agree that the story has some faults. I have begun another series named Money-Grubbing Lover, where the main character is a lot more independant, strong and steady. She is also older and more mature. It is not a **** setting but more of an ***** one. If you want to please try it out - I try to upload 1 chapter a day of that novel. Although Blossoming Flowers (My Life or Your Memory) has some faults in the fact that I did not plan out the character too much and just wrote whatever came to mind, I will work hard to finish it. I genuinely value your opinion, it helps me improve my writing, so thank you for your honest review!
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