Item: Silver Coin
Rating: 3.2
Author: olympaforged

olympaforgedLv44yr

2020-08-13 22:42

I like the story but I hi early believe all the chapters should be looked over. Everything feels a bit rushed and things are very unclear and confusing. Things are not really explained well, that's what lead to my confusion. I do love the characters of the story. I dont know if this is your first work or not but I commend your effort on this book.

Silver Coin

Ghostblood

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45 Chs

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GhostbloodAuthor

Yes, this is my 1st book. I do plan to work on old things in it, but after the book is done. I don't really have the time to go back on it now, but I will one day. Sorry about that... Is there something you don't understand you need clear now? I know a lot of readers want me to fix the Russ and Silver thing. I will when I can.

4yr

olympaforgedLv4

The whole russ and silver era thing but you already mentioned that. The Richard and Alan thing also, I'm hella confused about who is who. Also peoples feelings are confusing for example ala got me hella confused lol. I hope I'm not offending you In anyway btw

4yr

GhostbloodAuthor

You're not offending me in any way at all. Because I know the story, it's hard to tell how much is need to explain without saying too much, too soon. I felt the "Richard and Ala" thing didn't need much to talk about. For the thing, it aside a story, and a lot of people don't like them so I said as much as I needed too and then moved on. As I was doing before, it helps to know an outside view of what is and isn't confusing, that way when I go back and fix stuff, I will know what to add if needed. Sorry, I took a long time to get back to you, I didn't see the notifications for this. Feel free to message me if you have more questions.

olympaforged:The whole russ and silver era thing but you already mentioned that. The Richard and Alan thing also, I'm hella confused about who is who. Also peoples feelings are confusing for example ala got me hella confused lol. I hope I'm not offending you In anyway btw

4yr

olympaforgedLv4

bet. good to here from you 😁

Ghostblood:You're not offending me in any way at all. Because I know the story, it's hard to tell how much is need to explain without saying too much, too soon. I felt the "Richard and Ala" thing didn't need much to talk about. For the thing, it aside a story, and a lot of people don't like them so I said as much as I needed too and then moved on. As I was doing before, it helps to know an outside view of what is and isn't confusing, that way when I go back and fix stuff, I will know what to add if needed. Sorry, I took a long time to get back to you, I didn't see the notifications for this. Feel free to message me if you have more questions.

4yr

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