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Mia_Avera
Mia_AveraLv134yr
2020-05-05 08:56

Such a great book! It doesn’t follow the cliche story line with a dumb fl who relies on the ml for everything. Can’t wait to see more chapters!

She Became a Heartbreaker After Entering the Novel

Mr. Yan
4.6
390 Chs

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xing_
xing_Lv10

This is such a fun read! So far, misunderstandings are immediately resolved and the fl is really funny. The mood is quite light. I love it! I hope that this will be continued. Thank you!

4yr

Rameen_Hayat
Rameen_HayatLv4

Man. I love this book. The author and translator did such a great job on it👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 There should be more books like these. I literally died laughing

4yr
lilleotiffany
lilleotiffanyLv14

Finished reading Chapter 60 so I strolled down, it skipped to the to be continued page. Went back scrolled down went right back to be continued page pressed the back arrow again.............Still waiting for Chapter 61

4yr
Damaris_03
Damaris_03Lv4

Couldn't help but review! This is a very very nice read, and a whole lot of fun!<3 hopefully it makes it out of the trial so we can read some more!<333 xD ......................................... At the beginning, it gave me the vibes of 'young master mo, are you done kissing?'. If you like that book, you'll definitely like this one! In fact, I feel I like this one is better! Only time will tell, but right now, as in in ch 60, I really like this book! Do give it a try! Here's a cheer for the author/Tl *cheers* do keep doing such a marvelous work!

4yr
Immaculate_Murira
Immaculate_MuriraLv4

First, I am unwilling to waste any fast passes or coins to unlock chapters. I really dislike the female lead. Her personality makes the whole book seem like a joke which may be good for a comedy but it makes the romance aspects of the book appear superficial and insincere. At the moment, I am simply not convinced by the supposed romance. Also, the chapters are small so after reading 39 chapters, I feel that I haven't read anything substantial.

4yr
Adqui
AdquiLv11

Irritating. The MC constant flattering gets annoying easily, the assistant is pretty bold and unprofessional to be one, if you are going to be one scheming bastard at least do it well and smartly, with those brains how are you supposed to help yoir oh so great boss? The ML seems to be the classic cold CEO, no much personality to see at first. Aaaah, I wonder why so many people review this with so many starts, is hard to find at least interesting books with so many people rating 5 starts to paper cutter stuff

4yr
Villainess_is_here
Villainess_is_hereLv3

The synopsis was great so i thought that the story would be too! I never listen to the 'bad' reviews because maybe 'its not totally true' or they 'still haven't read the whole story before they judge first' is what i thought. BUT!!!!!!!!! I AM GREATLY!!! Honestly!!! disappointed with the story and mainly the ML !!!! First of all!!!! IM SORRY for ranting!!! You see... The ML is your typical CEO iceberg. Indifferent. Fearsome I'm totally cool with that but his personality was just PLAIN. HE IS LITERALLY JUST LIKE ICE. nothingcan move him. At. All.maybe the MC justa little bit thou then still come to his ice-****ty personality. He's not pampering her. He doesn't look like he loves her at all. Anyway, i just don't feel the romance in this novel in which I'm expecting too. TOO PLAIN. TOOCLICHÈ. Mc was great. But too much boot licking or ml "thigh hugging" and the ml do not care at all. Not even flustered or moved. Why continue seeing its ineffective? Can she use other method other that lousy excuse? Arg! Even other transmigrated/reincarnated novel would have many plans considering her 'survival instinct' of hugging his 'thigh' to survive. !!!! The secretary of ML which constantly bicker with MC was just annoying to the core. He is bot doing his hob properly like a secretary of a big corp would. And what i hate about this is EVEN WHEN HE (secretary ml) Criticize, Badmouth, Degrade AND INSULT THE MC INFRONT OF ML . ML JUST DONT CARE!!!! The fudge!! Im fuming MAD with this. HOW CAN HE BE SO INDIFFERENT WITH HIS WOMAN?!! if he truly love her why let others badmouth her?! He will only take move when she cry or is in pain. He is even more annoying when his mad because he gets VERY FORCEFUL to mc in which I've only seen on 1 chptr where she gets her punishment of staying at home which may seem 'gentle' of him but i know it'll change soon.. just like your typical chinese novel . Yknow what i mean.. In the end i still read this all upto current chptrs hoping that maybe i can read a lil bit of romance even once huhuhuh I'm disappointed to the core. (U guys will understand once you readthis)

4yr
POOJA33
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Deathismybff
DeathismybffLv10

This story is fantastic and addicting!! I first read this story on Wattpad and its so thrilling. I also look through the Novelupdates but its not in there.. luckily, I found it here..❣️❣️ I learned a lot of flirtatious pick up lines and cheezy lines to try it and say it to my boyfriend.😂 I’m looking forward for more😂. Nice work there Ms./Mr Author! I’m all here keep on reading and waiting for more! Thank You!

4yr
DanteSama
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