Item: She Became a Heartbreaker After Entering the Novel
Rating: 2.2
Author: Villainess_is_here

Villainess_is_hereLv34yr

2020-05-17 17:15

The synopsis was great so i thought that the story would be too! I never listen to the 'bad' reviews because maybe 'its not totally true' or they 'still haven't read the whole story before they judge first' is what i thought. BUT!!!!!!!!! I AM GREATLY!!! Honestly!!! disappointed with the story and mainly the ML !!!! First of all!!!! IM SORRY for ranting!!! You see... The ML is your typical CEO iceberg. Indifferent. Fearsome I'm totally cool with that but his personality was just PLAIN. HE IS LITERALLY JUST LIKE ICE. nothingcan move him. At. All.maybe the MC justa little bit thou then still come to his ice-****ty personality. He's not pampering her. He doesn't look like he loves her at all. Anyway, i just don't feel the romance in this novel in which I'm expecting too. TOO PLAIN. TOOCLICHÈ. Mc was great. But too much boot licking or ml "thigh hugging" and the ml do not care at all. Not even flustered or moved. Why continue seeing its ineffective? Can she use other method other that lousy excuse? Arg! Even other transmigrated/reincarnated novel would have many plans considering her 'survival instinct' of hugging his 'thigh' to survive. !!!! The secretary of ML which constantly bicker with MC was just annoying to the core. He is bot doing his hob properly like a secretary of a big corp would. And what i hate about this is EVEN WHEN HE (secretary ml) Criticize, Badmouth, Degrade AND INSULT THE MC INFRONT OF ML . ML JUST DONT CARE!!!! The fudge!! Im fuming MAD with this. HOW CAN HE BE SO INDIFFERENT WITH HIS WOMAN?!! if he truly love her why let others badmouth her?! He will only take move when she cry or is in pain. He is even more annoying when his mad because he gets VERY FORCEFUL to mc in which I've only seen on 1 chptr where she gets her punishment of staying at home which may seem 'gentle' of him but i know it'll change soon.. just like your typical chinese novel . Yknow what i mean.. In the end i still read this all upto current chptrs hoping that maybe i can read a lil bit of romance even once huhuhuh I'm disappointed to the core. (U guys will understand once you readthis)

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