hey great work you have me hooked up in your writings i agree with you about the MC joining the hestia familia and babying bell it is lame and the concept about that new goddess i just loved it about goddess of death being thought as evil although you making the MC a KHAIIT was a bit hard to swallow will you add romance about the MC and the GODDESS a novel just doesn't feel complete with romance being there and i really liked the character of the goddess and you by the way are really good at conveying emotions through words on that chapter when the MC joins the familia of the goddess with just a tint of sorrow...keep up the good work and i hope this novel is continued seriously by you.
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Wherever the flow goes, I guess. Though I also rooted for their further take of relationship! And thank you for your time reviewing this fic, It's a great thing to be appreciated.
i had a question according to the plot the MC has kept his powers from skyrim and skills as well.so according to the standard of this world how powerfull is he?he easily escaped ains and her team of elite adventures they were not even able to hit him so does that mean he is easily fight a lvl 6 team that makes him powerfull and add the power he recives from his goddess falna wow that is powerfull..i will like to see him bash those arrogant adventures from season 2 and of course BETE .
I'll try to make it less spoiler, but oh well, He's a tanker type while his agillty could par with 'average' lvl 6, He could escape with Ais party just because he surprised them with a shout and got away due to his magic. In conclusion, I'll try to not to follow 'stat is everything' trope in webnovel, BUT I'm a mere ameteurish writer so I may inevitably follow these cause lack of creativity or something but I'll try regardless.
anshu_das_Vaishnav:i had a question according to the plot the MC has kept his powers from skyrim and skills as well.so according to the standard of this world how powerfull is he?he easily escaped ains and her team of elite adventures they were not even able to hit him so does that mean he is easily fight a lvl 6 team that makes him powerfull and add the power he recives from his goddess falna wow that is powerfull..i will like to see him bash those arrogant adventures from season 2 and of course BETE .
if you are confused about strength level description i recommend "AMBER SWORD" this light novel has one of the best detailed level explanation although i don't know if its applicable in your story but it is a good read...and don't call yourself "mere *******ish" you are a good writer i love it and hope you continue.
Abbeysensei:I'll try to make it less spoiler, but oh well, He's a tanker type while his agillty could par with 'average' lvl 6, He could escape with Ais party just because he surprised them with a shout and got away due to his magic. In conclusion, I'll try to not to follow 'stat is everything' trope in webnovel, BUT I'm a mere ameteurish writer so I may inevitably follow these cause lack of creativity or something but I'll try regardless.
Ah yes, Amber sword it've been collecting in dusts of my novelupdates account, I'll read it once I have the time thank you.
anshu_das_Vaishnav:if you are confused about strength level description i recommend "AMBER SWORD" this light novel has one of the best detailed level explanation although i don't know if its applicable in your story but it is a good read...and don't call yourself "mere *******ish" you are a good writer i love it and hope you continue.
