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2022-05-19 01:37

I really liked how the story started but I didn’t like how it was too rushed & summarized towards the end. I Feel like the author had all these ideas of where they wanted the story to go but could not figure how to get there. Instead they just sorta winged it and moved on. I don’t feel I can recommend cause it wasn’t really satisfying how it ended.

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