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2020-04-19 22:56

Currently my best.... The translation is quite good... Ah like the storyline... MC is not always dumb and stupid... The characters are well made... No random killing off of characters!

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I remember reading this to like 400 chapters and then quitting using mtl. I loved the beginning. This story uses the premise of lord if mysteries and adds some pretty unique ideas.... and that's where I stopped liking it. People say if you like lord of mysteries then you'll like this. I just wanna say... it was true at the beginning. Then he turned into a .... SPOILER COMING UP: . . . . . . Ot started off great. But there is one interesting quirk about his system. Yes. He has a system. He gets exp points by killing other beings, including humans. At the beginning he is against killing other humans for exp. Then at some point his inhibitions disappear. At one point he goes and murders a whole lot of other magical occupational people like him (it wasn't his fault, kind of, he was out of control and being controlled). But after he gets away his only regret is that he couldn't get more points That's when it started getting iffy for me. I'm not looking for a story better or as good as lord of mysteries, but since people kept saying it was a good replacement while waiting for updates I thought I'd try. It's not bad, but it's not good for me. The mc is nothing the lord of mysteries mc. He world building is good but some things get looked over. The mc was pretty good but then he began turning out like typical power hungry mc. There are reasons for why he needs for (there is this character trying to kill him) and the world is changing. Honestly, it's not a bad novel. I just think my expectations were too high. The character and plot development need serious help. But everything else is okay.

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