Review Detail of LongsonFullmetal in Reincarnated As Mizuki

Normally i dont give one star reviews but i just couldn't stop myself. There are various problems with this. First, and this may be subjective to me, this fanfic made me cringe alot. And not in a good way. Second, the timeline is a mess. Characters are in places where they shouldnt be yet and meet other characters at a time where it would have been impossible. Third, the whole story just feels like a wish fullfillment of the author, which is an okay thing to do, but it has been a bad read for me and I just couldnt enjoy it. The setting and the idea where great, but the execution left me Disappointed. There are also spelling and grammar errors. sometimes missing words, which just disturb the readability. I hope the author improves with this experience for i can see that he is creative with his ideas.