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Fly_you_fools
Fly_you_foolsLv43yr
2021-12-11 20:21

This story is good but fixing the grammatical errors will even make this even better, now I’m going say this, there are some reviews here that say there is NTR here, no there isn’t. The mc doesn’t love Kanade, he has NO feelings for her. (Also hope that there will be more updates, please)

Dream of The Beginning

Fellas
3.0
65 Chs

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Ventura
VenturaLv5

I'll be sincere, the story is pretty interesting, but the whole "Kanade" is just a HUGE turn down and big friking NOPE for me, I wont say is NTR but it's of bad taste. I feel the story would be a lot better with that. For those that don't mind it, the novel will be pretty interesting.

3yr

Dfransginola
DfransginolaLv5

WARNING NTR❗❗❗ WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗WARNING NTR❗❗❗

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Arthur_D_Pendragon
Arthur_D_PendragonLv2

author hasn't added the tag but don't read if you are disgusted by the explicit notorare elements in the fic... ..............................................

3yr
Ero_Tenshi
Ero_TenshiLv3

This was actually a decent fate ff, i expect the author to not drop this story ..................................................................................................................................................

3yr
12HCL
12HCLLv3

it was good at first bad when too much maiham happened ntr and losing skills that you worked hard for get tricked even when having mystic eyes being betrayed over and over it's a wast bad ending one don't read

3yr
Kaniion
KaniionLv2

It was an interesting story, but after what was shown about Kanade I dropped it, the author should say the story had that kind of content in the synopsis, a lot of people find it unpleasant.

3yr
Na1gel
Na1gelLv4

just so you know i copied this comment so its not mine but i agree with everything he says in this ....this is about kanade one of the main girls in the story lol ...... first, she was getting close with him and mc got closer to her too it's like by the normal (webnovel plot) gonna be a start of a happy relationship, then just bam she started sleeping with his friends and got raped by her father and then got converted to a tragic heroine and his friend knew that they were close she said it too (later we got to know she was acting) but his friend knew that and got off on it too that's why I also said explicit notorare means explicitly and many people don't like this kind of storyline and I don't too when the girls close to mc with some romantic plot start getting raped and sleeping with his friends

3yr
Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10

What a disgusting thing to put in this novel.

3yr
happy_sad
happy_sadLv13

You know why Disgusting féçķ 夢のつづき追いかけていたはずなのに 曲がりくねった細い道人につまずく あの頃みたいにって戻りたい訳じゃないの 無くしてきた空を探してる わかってくれますように犠牲になったような 悲しい顔はやめてよ 罪の最後は淚じゃないよずっと苦しく背負ってくんだ 出口見えない感情迷路に誰を待ってるの? 白いノ一トに綴ったようにもっと素直に吐き出したいよ 何から 逃れたいんだ 現実ってやつ? 叶えるために 生きてるんだって 忘れちゃいそうな 夜の真ん中 無難になん てやってられないから 帰る場所もないの この想いを消してしまうには まだ人生長いでしょ? 懐くしくなる こんな痛みも歓迎じゃん 謝らなくちゃいけないよね、あー、 ごめんね うまく言えなくて心配かけたままだったね あの日かかえた全部あしたかかえる全部 順番つけたりはしないから わかってくれますようにそっと目を閉じたんだ 見たくないものまで見えんだもん いらない噂にちょっと 初めて聞く発言どっち 向かい合ったら友達だって 嘘はやめてね 深いハートが苛立つ様に体ん中燃えているんだ ホントは 期待してんの 現実ってやつ? 叶えるために生きてるんだって 叫びたくなるよ聞こえていますか? 無難になんてやってられないから 帰る場所もないの 優しさには いつも感謝してる だから強くなりたい 進むために 敵も味方も歓迎じゃん どうやって次のドア開けるんだっけ? 考えてる? もう引き返せない物語始まってるんだ 目を覚ませ、目を覚ませ この想いを消してしまうには まだ人生長いでしょ? やり残してるコトやり直してみたいから もう一度ゆこう 叶えるために 生きてるんだって 叫びたくなるよ聞こえていますか? 無難になんて やってられないから 帰る場所もないの 優しさには いつも感謝してる だから強くなりたい 懐かしくなる こんな痛みも歓迎じゃん

3yr
DaoistqugZIx
DaoistqugZIxLv1

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