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Ventura
VenturaLv53yr
2021-10-23 15:30

I'll be sincere, the story is pretty interesting, but the whole "Kanade" is just a HUGE turn down and big friking NOPE for me, I wont say is NTR but it's of bad taste. I feel the story would be a lot better with that. For those that don't mind it, the novel will be pretty interesting.

Dream of The Beginning

Fellas
3.0
65 Chs

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DetectiveHarem
DetectiveHaremLv14

what do you mean?

3yr
Ventura
VenturaLv5

The part of the novel that involves Kanade point of view.

DetectiveHarem:what do you mean?
3yr
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Vitrialia_Amermes
Vitrialia_AmermesLv3

she like to collect men for her s&x slave ,so what wrong with that ??? I mean she just think mc like some trophy for she to collect , so you want to add that kind girl into mc harem??

Ventura:The part of the novel that involves Kanade point of view.
3yr
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Ventura
VenturaLv5

No, i say i don't like that part, just not to my taste

Vitrialia_Amermes:she like to collect men for her s&x slave ,so what wrong with that ??? I mean she just think mc like some trophy for she to collect , so you want to add that kind girl into mc harem??
3yr
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JmWoods
JmWoodsLv14

For me it is about the way she’d be added. i read a danmachi fanfic where the mc turned freya down for such a reason , and she just cut contact with her familia to the point of starvation. It got to the point that her familia found the mc and asked him to reconsider because of what she was doing.

Ventura:No, i say i don't like that part, just not to my taste
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3yr
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Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5

what is the name of the fic? I'm curious

JmWoods:For me it is about the way she’d be added. i read a danmachi fanfic where the mc turned freya down for such a reason , and she just cut contact with her familia to the point of starvation. It got to the point that her familia found the mc and asked him to reconsider because of what she was doing.
3yr
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Loophus
LoophusLv4

i was having a good day untill i read the part

3yr
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Mad_Uchiha303
Mad_Uchiha303Lv12

Also curious as to which ff

JmWoods:For me it is about the way she’d be added. i read a danmachi fanfic where the mc turned freya down for such a reason , and she just cut contact with her familia to the point of starvation. It got to the point that her familia found the mc and asked him to reconsider because of what she was doing.
3yr
Lustsifer
LustsiferLv13

I think it was EP:IC (Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos).

Nogitsune96:what is the name of the fic? I'm curious
2yr
Lustsifer
LustsiferLv13

I think it was EP:IC (Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos).

Mad_Uchiha303:Also curious as to which ff
2yr
DeathBySNUSNU
DeathBySNUSNULv4

Sigh. It's always EPIC.

Lustsifer:I think it was EP:IC (Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos).
2yr
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KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4

that ff is just good at the beggining then became repetetive

DeathBySNUSNU:Sigh. It's always EPIC.
2yr
7
Ri_On
Ri_OnLv12

Interesting i found your comment

Vitrialia_Amermes:she like to collect men for her s&x slave ,so what wrong with that ??? I mean she just think mc like some trophy for she to collect , so you want to add that kind girl into mc harem??
2yr
BigDadChad
BigDadChadLv3

you sir have saved me, I nearly gave this a shot. I hate anything even remotely close to NTR, so thanks!

2yr
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Jaziyah
JaziyahLv4

Whattt ?? What’ s wrong with that ??

Vitrialia_Amermes:she like to collect men for her s&x slave ,so what wrong with that ??? I mean she just think mc like some trophy for she to collect , so you want to add that kind girl into mc harem??
1yr
Jaziyah
JaziyahLv4

Same

JmWoods:For me it is about the way she’d be added. i read a danmachi fanfic where the mc turned freya down for such a reason , and she just cut contact with her familia to the point of starvation. It got to the point that her familia found the mc and asked him to reconsider because of what she was doing.
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just so you know i copied this comment so its not mine but i agree with everything he says in this ....this is about kanade one of the main girls in the story lol ...... first, she was getting close with him and mc got closer to her too it's like by the normal (webnovel plot) gonna be a start of a happy relationship, then just bam she started sleeping with his friends and got raped by her father and then got converted to a tragic heroine and his friend knew that they were close she said it too (later we got to know she was acting) but his friend knew that and got off on it too that's why I also said explicit notorare means explicitly and many people don't like this kind of storyline and I don't too when the girls close to mc with some romantic plot start getting raped and sleeping with his friends

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Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10

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happy_sadLv13

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