Why are you allowed to rate your own things? Alright, if I could I would give this a 2.5 the writing is questionable at some points the author has a goal in mind but has trouble conveying that. I believe he does character interactions fine but combat seems to be somewhat limited.... But, this is me I'm talking about. I'm trying to fairly critic my work and not be biased... Like other writers who shouldn't just slap on trending tags just to inflate views and exploit the system.
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