Not NTR gamer, it's an open relationship NTR is cheating while intending Jealousy while Veri had mentioned he gets jealous it's not to the point of NTR besides their emotions are slowly changing.

You're a good person.

You're damn right he does!

I messed up the timer... So this is kinda incomplete, missing my final check.... whoops

I'm not going to steal anybodies pictures, as I am not a good artist.

I've somewhat addressed their emotions in the second chapter I've written, they aren't exactly 'Normal' in the "Other World" incredibly lose Morales and jaded is what I'm trying to go for. It'll probably take me a little to really get into the swing of their characters, I've had them on paper for a while but never really wrote anything with them before.

I left out character details because I'm assuming people know what the characters in overlord are and area details for the same reason.

I figured some people would be interested, Might be a little until the next chapter, I need to refresh myself on the manga and anime.

You nailed what I was going for with the pair.

Used to go on a walks but since a thing happened last year I've avoided them... But otherwise I'm hoping my love for Overlord will help me through my lack of inspiration, I have a little currently with the trailer for the fourth season out and about.

Thanks, I'll probably do something with Lucius at some point but for now he's on the bench I have two protagonists I think will work very well for an Overlord Fanfic working on their stuff at the moment.

Wow... There are just no words. So many ways to have said that nicer Im sorry your life sucks man it'll work out for you eventually.

Differences in adventuring and decisions also the second season will be vastly different.

I quite love Clementine shes... "Deliciously Evil", only evil because she decided to be one day I quite like everyone's portrayal in the manga and it sheds some light on Clementine. I haven't had the pleasure to read any of the books as I would like to buy them instead of reading them online.

Hey, I noticed you wrote a comment that disappeared who was it in reference to? I'm overcome with curiosity and decided to seek out your profile. Just teasing don't worry. Am kinda curious however, there was quite a bit going on...

Naughty, naughty... Can't see this for some reason when I look at the chapter itself so I haven't the faintest clue who this is about yet.

Probably a form of torture she would employ

No problem me!

Thanks for the review me!

Why are you allowed to rate your own things? Alright, if I could I would give this a 2.5 the writing is questionable at some points the author has a goal in mind but has trouble conveying that. I believe he does character interactions fine but combat seems to be somewhat limited.... But, this is me I'm talking about. I'm trying to fairly critic my work and not be biased... Like other writers who shouldn't just slap on trending tags just to inflate views and exploit the system.