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Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv134yrTonyorobsky

I started reading this because I wanted to read something kinky. I barely finished the first chapter. Terrible grammar. Didn’t read enough to have an opinion on the story, characters and background so I just rated them at 3 (average). They could be better than that, or worse. I’ll never know, cause the grammar is a big turn off. And I’m not that good in english either, still use Reverso and Thesaurus each time I write a chapter in my fics.

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Daoassist

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Daoassist
DaoassistAuthorDaoassist

Thank you for your feedback. My English is worse than yours, I have noticed Reverso and Thesaurus, I will try to improve my work with them.

Daoassist
DaoassistAuthorDaoassist

I tried to edit chapter 1 and chapter 2 using Reverso, if not difficult, look.