I started reading this because I wanted to read something kinky. I barely finished the first chapter. Terrible grammar. Didn’t read enough to have an opinion on the story, characters and background so I just rated them at 3 (average). They could be better than that, or worse. I’ll never know, cause the grammar is a big turn off. And I’m not that good in english either, still use Reverso and Thesaurus each time I write a chapter in my fics.
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