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OrionSolarwing
OrionSolarwingLv24yr
2020-04-30 03:54

I like your book but there are alot of times it looks like you just randomly add things to it that done fit in your story like ivy and the whole chapter with his mom to many things like that so though your story has potential im going to have to drop it hope you fix it next time you write a story

Embodiment of Taint and Purity

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Well to be honest that’s because at first I wrote the chapters spontaneously without taking them very seriously now I try to make everything fit together.

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