Review Detail of InterPlanarGod in The Unknown Goddess: A Naruto FanFic

Writing quality: grammar is fine, but your punctuation is so horrible that it makes me want to vomit every time I see a sentance that needs a period 2 stars. Stability of updates 2 stars. nuff said. story development. 2 stars. come on dude. she has no power, and yet she badmouths hirashi hyuga and doesnt get any backlash. 3 stars for character design, she makes some sense, but she's depressing af 2 stars to world background, it's not accurate enough.