Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Dawn of the First Emperor

For the most part, the story does give out an intriguing premise. I like the ideas that are flowing throughout this novel as well as the concept. However, I have my share of criticism towards the execution. There are plenty walls of text, and it took me a while to fully grasp what was going on. The synopsis itself is clear but the chapters made me check twice even three times to understand it fully. Characters are clear as well as the world. Despite my criticism I do see the potential in this story, which is why best of luck to the author to continue this novel.