Item: The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money
Rating: 2
Author: Maera

MaeraLv114yr

2020-02-08 19:11

Weak plot. It's too childish and full of plot holes. Nonsensical and illogical characters and occurrences. Really it's not worth my time. I presume that this was written by a teenager girl without any actual knowledge of properly creating a sound story. I'm sorry if this is harsh but the truth is most of it makes no sense. This is supposed to be in a modern society how can the ppl that killed her mother and hide it for many years be so stupid to directly admit it in her own house? Or how can a multimillion clothing company be exposed so easily of fraud with a couple of words.. seriously author should go back and rewrite the whole thing in a way that will be more solid.

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

Yin Yiyu

4.2

1349 Chs

Liked by 7 people

Replies5

Hyacinthrose33Lv11

Yeah, most of the bad people in mc side they all like get away, im like why that other Lu family is in the business? Why that Wang mother and daughter didn't get their retribution? Why they let go of that fake cousin and get them kidnapped and still not pursue and torture her? Why most the people around the mc is freaking bad, hate her and bullying her to the extend that her reputation will be ruin and still she dont do anything and yeah that ex-fiancee of the husband of her bestfriend why it seems not punish.. And yeah, the only nice to the mc is the people who she "discovered" will be popular in the future(other than her family nice to her). I like the story but a lot of loophole and why they always let go of those villian. The ml dont even punish those people who trying to harm her, which is not like a "gang leader" thing to be. If he is a gang leader why let those people go and keep repeating hurting her. I got really caught up with those "missing important thing"..

4yr

MaeraLv11

Yup way too childish.. Really not worth the time to read..

4yr

MaeraLv11

And I strongly recommend that they should add tags with the age target groups these books are meant to belong to. For e.g. thisone cannot pass the 12y.o.. It might look harsh but it would really save all of us some time, including the authors because then she wouldn't have to go back and rebuild it in a more solid way, or bearable for that matter. And the readers won't waste their time in something they are really not going to enjoy if they are not interested..

Maera:Yup way too childish.. Really not worth the time to read..

4yr

MaeraLv11

Maera:Yup way too childish.. Really not worth the time to read..

4yr

MaeraLv11

Maera:Yup way too childish.. Really not worth the time to read..

4yr

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