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MokiSwann
MokiSwannLv105yr
2019-12-22 01:01

I think this story has the potential to be great. It just needs and editor who can rearrange the English to make sense. The MC is great and she’s willing to be proactive regarding changing her future. She will have some awesome revenge later on

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

Yin Yiyu
4.6
1349 Chs

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MB143
MB143Lv14

Well for me FLs naivety is now bordering on stupidity.She gets herself into situations which even children might be able to avoid and BAAAAM the ML comes in from God knows where and sweeps in to rescue her. I seriously think the rebirth maybe did something to her brain but we are supposed to think that she is totally smart and resourceful.Maybe In your dreams author. This is typical novel where the beginning idea is good but the execution is all messed up however I have seen similar novels liked by people so go ahead and give it try.

5yr

chiiiii
chiiiiiLv11

Although the grammar is not very good due to being machine translated, it is definitely bearable. If anything, the grammar is miles ahead of some original stories. The content of the story shines through despite the rough translation. I’ve fallen for the character of the FL and am interested in the ML. Although the FL is still a little naive, she will not allow herself to be taken advantage of. The shadows and nightmares of the past make her stronger in the present, and allow her to rectify the mistakes from the past. The FL is not omnipotent, but she is definitely giving it her all to prevent and overcome the past. The ML is a mysterious character so far and the interactions between the two leads are quite cute, as they are both new to love. **. The revenge is definitely satisfying!!! Please give this novel a try.

5yr
John_Bird
John_BirdLv1

Small grammar mistakes but it does not distract the reader from the main plot. Storyline is not predictable and has smooth transitions. Overall I would recommend highly.

5yr
Maera
MaeraLv11

Weak plot. It's too childish and full of plot holes. Nonsensical and illogical characters and occurrences. Really it's not worth my time. I presume that this was written by a teenager girl without any actual knowledge of properly creating a sound story. I'm sorry if this is harsh but the truth is most of it makes no sense. This is supposed to be in a modern society how can the ppl that killed her mother and hide it for many years be so stupid to directly admit it in her own house? Or how can a multimillion clothing company be exposed so easily of fraud with a couple of words.. seriously author should go back and rewrite the whole thing in a way that will be more solid.

5yr
Rainhasfallen
RainhasfallenLv12

Tried reading from the first chapter and it all does not make sense. The grammar is all over the place and it still does not make sense!! Hope you get a proper translator instead of a machine translated one.

5yr
Raebit
RaebitLv2

The story itself isn't that bad, I like the way she saving poor people. But all people she saved is too convenient, she save A oh my god A is actually a important people in future!, she save B, she is important figure! Which is bad but not too bad if you want smooth or easy to read. When dealing with guy her IQ just went off, it irks me. I read until chap 42, and everytime she is dealing with a guy it iritate me. It seems like she must save him desperately like why not just save then leave or something? no she takes care of unknown person by herself, ALONE, she also decide not to ask her friend help just because "oh no what if my friend ask anything about this guy?", why not just be honest? "I found a guy near river, help me fetch me up" WHY ???? then she end up staying in hotel with no money, no mobile phone, alone!. You are a young woman, not scared if he end up doing something to you?! and the heck, they sleep in one room, where the hell her IQ?!, isn't with her reborn he knew a guy is not all a good person especially stranger? and the guy is easily fell in love, I mean, "I feel relax by seeing her liveliness", you just know her for 30 minuetes??? The romance is really iritating me, else isn't that bad beside convenient plot. If you want slow and deep romance this isn't for you. If you hate MC who's IQ went offline everytime she saw a guy this isn't for you. It is really funny she only vigilant to her old enemies only.., I mean you don't learn from past mistake? you trust them and end up being betrayed? now you easily trust someone, and just hate enemies she knew at that time, what if there is more hidden enemy? So, if you want smooth and easy to read without deep thoughts this is for you, if you want a bit more plot and weight, this isn't for you.

4yr
XiaoXixi
XiaoXixiLv12

This novel has many plot holes. For example, when FL found who schemed against her family, she did not pursue the mastermind and let the mastermind makes trouble again and again throughout the storyline. The ML is a leader of both business and underworld and said many times that he regrets he does not take care of FL but ML does not arrange bodyguards to protect FL allowing FL keeps being kidnapped. So disappointed with these things.

4yr
hanplum
hanplumLv3

MC is naive and stupid. the story label her as smart, but she is just using her knowledge about who becomes successful from her previous life and invest in those in this life... and I think she had tooo much. The MC acts like a spoiled child, oftentimes the ML have to come and save her just because of her stupid actions and why would she do it in the first place?!?! even a child will know how to not do that.

4yr
Teresita_Navarro
Teresita_NavarroLv4

So funny and very entertaining😭🤣😭🤣💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻

4yr
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