Translation quality- Bunch of grammar mistakes, which I expected since it’s machine translated. Stability of updating- Honestly, I wouldn’t know. I’ve literally started reading today and i’m only 32 or something chapters in. I’ve had enough. Story development/character design- Ah, we’ve gotten onto the most awaited by me. Honestly, the story is absolute shït within the first 32 chapters (which is how much i’ve read so far, so I understand i’m making a quick judgement but honestly I bet you’d feel the same). The female lead is the MOST stupidly naive woman I’ve fùcking read on this app. I’m pretty sure she has Stockholm syndrome at like chapter 30 since she’s literally fücking crying during sexual intercourse and saying how much it fûcking hurts, yet still begins to like the male lead. She doesn’t explain why she wants the money and just continues to be seen as a money grubbing bïtch. Oh, and she literally thinks it’s her fault that she got ráped since she “asked for it” at like chapter 15 or something (I’m probably wrong). Now, the dîckhead male lead. He has the audacity to not even say a simple fûcking sorry when he repeatedly ràpes the fl. I understand he begins to be kinder but holy fûck at least feel more guilty for bloody ráping someone. Well to add it all up, he’s a fûcking bastard that should not even exist through words. World design- it’s eh. The world is shît. People frfr be calling the fl a prostîtute when it’s literally none of their business. Honestly I shouldn’t be mad at a book but I don’t think it’s right to include râpe and the woman falling in love BECAUSE of fear or his sudden “gentleness”. Anyways, if you want, read it. Your loss 🤷♀️ Do correct me if I said some bullshît :)
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LIKELmao I only gave 2/3 stars to the story updates since I literally don’t know haha
