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HeartOfAServant
HeartOfAServantLv114yr
2020-11-08 02:53

Weird story Interesting at first. chaps 88 plus turned put ridiculous. The seemingly smart FL turned stupid They have just discussed not to Alert the double that they suspect him, but that exactly what she did a Few hrs later. Its really quite easy to see, Nan cheng dealt heavy blws with severe bleeding, obviously he wont look unscathed no matter how miracle dr cures him in a span of 2 days Too rIdiculuos.. And FL in her past life was disguised as a man and knows how to fIght and hold Guns Right? what suddenly happen, she became a damsel in distress all of a sudden. What happen to Bai Qi the original character?

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Ce_reene
Ce_reeneLv2

I have read till the part where she says that he should leave her alone but he keeps coming to her apartment

Glory_Mwende
Glory_MwendeLv1

You are right I thought she would be kinda OP but no it's kinda stupid she is so indecisive she is suffering way too much for a person in their second life

Lazy_Bitch13
Lazy_Bitch13Lv10

I've read a few chapters and it looks very weird. Her character was just not on point and she acted without thinking. You know those characters that were portrayed smart by the author but acts stupid and has some questionable decisions almost every time, she's it.

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