Review Detail of Sugakookie_3 in My Mr. Song is extremely protective!

I enjoyed the synopsis, so I decided to read the novel. I am disappointed. If this isn't a MTL than the writing needs to be improved. If it is a MTL like another review stated then it NEEDS an editor. There are too many previously deleted chapters that still appear ruining the reading flow if a reader does not pay attention. It's a pity because this has the potential to be a great story if it was cleaned up.