webnovel
Pegasus_lx
Pegasus_lxLv44yr
2020-08-16 10:33

The story line is interesting with enough twists. But the gender pronouns are mixed up, and it’s confusing to know if the character is male or female.

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Nessie_Smith
Nessie_SmithLv10

It started off great, but like most light novels the powerful female lead became a little women that needed her man to take a step without tripping once the ml is introduced. It started with her wanting a divorce after she transmigrated, within 3 days she is a devoted house wife... Because he is handsome. *sigh* this shows how shallow the author views women. That they are only good as a support character in their own story and ment to cater to the male. The ml quickly over shadowed the fl and became the protagonist in her story. This is quiet sad on a personal level when I run into these type of light novels. [ once cultivation enters the ml skyrockets in power while the fl is given two support cultivations that she muddle about. And she feels thats ok because he will protect her.... How she survived so long in an apocalypse with that type of dependence on someone (meaning she doesnt need to be strong because the male thigh is there to hug) is beyond me] Majority of the chapter are of cooking or eating and lucky if something actually else is stated then food. Which wouldnt be bad if she would do something else! I read 115 chapters I believe and like 60 of them involved cooking or eating. There would be 3 chapters just on one meal, half a chapter of actual story then 3 more about another meal. It got boring and irritating fast. I think what really killed it for me even more that the personality swap once the ml enters the picture is the translation. Some chapters are repeated with an extra paragraph at the end. The pro noun swap around doesnt help. I probably would not be as annoyed if the translation wasnt so bad. All in all bad translation and a support type fl that is overshadowed constantly by ml type of story.

Related Stories

Overnight Hit: Vicious Stepmother and Genius Son

Ye Zhenzhen, the omnipotent queen of the film industry, transmigrated as the despised cannon-fodder villainess and wicked stepmother in a novel. Her husband was wealthy but had a superficial relationship with her, and her stepson was adorable but indifferent towards her. According to the book's original plot, this cannon-fodder villainess was about to face a tragic ending... Ye Zhenzhen thought, 'Since I've transmigrated into the book, why should I fear these 2D characters?' In the face of her cold and distant plastic husband's words, she retorted, "How can a grown man with a body temperature of thirty-seven degrees speak such icy and heartless words to his wife?" Then, she was faced with the irrational demands of her stepson's classmate's mother, "Ye Zhenzhen, you owe me an apology." She scoffed disdainfully, "Apologize to you? Will you kneel and listen to me if I do?" With her outstanding professional skills, she turned her life around by hosting a parent-child variety show, becoming an overnight sensation, and receiving countless acting offers! The stepson, who used to address her distantly and never as his mother, suddenly said, "My mom, Ye Zhenzhen, is the kindest and most beautiful woman in the world!" Haters: "So what if she's pretty? She married an old man for money!" One day, her plastic husband appeared at a charity gala and introduced himself, "Hello, everyone. I am Ye Zhenzhen's husband, the rumored old man." The audience below couldn't believe their eyes and ears! The handsome and wealthy CEO of Huan Ya Group was Ye Zhenzhen's husband?! Haters: "Being slapped back in the face like this hurt like hell!!"

Ruo Li · Urban
4.3
621 Chs

Betrayed by Fiance, Embraced by Hidden Tycoon

[MATURE CONTENT] Abigail Snow accidentally caught her fiancé being intimate with her sister. She learned that her fiancé had only used her to advance his business and had never truly loved her. Heartbroken, Abigail called off the engagement and left everything behind to start a new life with nothing. At her lowest point, she met Sawyer, a hidden tycoon who helped her rebuild her life and seek justice against those who made her suffer. As Abigail begins to fall in love with Sawyer, his childhood sweetheart reappears, causing doubt and confusion for her. *** Excerpt: Whoever this man was, he was her savior. If he hadn’t held her hand and pulled her, she might have become dead meat and gone straight to the afterlife. "Thank you so much, good sir," Abigail said softly as she finally looked up to see him. Abigail was stunned. "But I'm not planning to commit suicide. I tripped over my own feet,” she continued, avoiding eye contact. She stared at his chest—her line of sight only reaching his sturdy chest. “It sounds better to hear that, Miss. Because I don’t want to go to the police station to become a witness, or they might wrongly accuse me as a suspect,” he said with a sarcastic tone that caused Abigail to stifle a laugh. "Sir, I’m so grateful you helped me. You are my savior. I owe you my life—" Abigail paused, taken aback by her own words. How could she make such a deep vow to this man!? This man might take advantage of her if he was a bad person. Right? "Alright, young lady, you’re supposed to release your tight embrace on me. You’re safe now." Abigail was utterly shocked to hear his words. She only realized she was still in his arms, her hands tightly wrapped around his waist, and her entire body pressed against him. They were so close—close enough to hear his loud heartbeat. She quickly took a few steps back. _____ Author Novel: 1. DAMN! I FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM (Completed) 2. The Bride Of Immortal Crown Prince (Completed) 3. Rebirth: Dancing In My Destiny (Completed) 4. The Billionaire's Genius Wife (Completed) 5. Rebirth As The Vampire Lord's Wife (Completed) 6. My Billionaire Ex-Husband Chase Me Back (Completed) 7. Betrayed by Fiance, Embraced by Hidden Tycoon (Serializing) _____ How to contact me: >> Instagram account: authorpurplelight >> FB Page: Author_Purplelight >> Join my Discord Server: https://bit.ly/purplelightserver _____ Notes: The book cover belongs to the author. Please don't reuse it!

PurpleLight · Urban
4.6
170 Chs