Review Detail of Xerstoren in Terra Nostra

Author here! I'm going to be a little be shameless and also explain my book. This book sets the start of a multiverse where I would put a few other works I have in mind. The current world, which is called 'Kerana' had a mix system between western magic and cultivation. Our MC is someone who is unstable emotionally after a lot of **** happened through his life. He's not the smartest but he can defend himself. His strength lay into his obsessive compulsion into reach the perfection with everything he does. Do not expect an OP MC since the beginning, as I tried to make the story to not rely to much into ass-pulled power up's. However he's not a weakling either. I will try to not fall into much cliche's regarding the plot, as my intention with this story is to find my own writing style without doing things that I hate such as plain side character, villains that are **** or only serve to make MC stronger. Also keep in mind that in this story, there's not right or wrong. The mc will be in a world that had already been set into motion even before he appeared there, he will only be a new player in a much greater power game. This story is not an Harem, however, the mc does have romance with other females. Just now that there is a female lead and their time would be much later as Constantine need to learn how to love someone. Regarding females, they will appear into his life to make him learn something, although they will pass by, they will left behind their mark on him. This novel will also have another main male character. Wich will be the pinch point between the two stories(My other book called 'Entre Dioses y Titanes' or 'Between God's and Titan's') This would also ensure that the world isn't revolving around Constantine all the time. You can expect ***** content such as lemon scenes, gore, torture and other darker aspects that I felt needed to add into the story to put everything into perspective for the characters. Tragedy will happen to the MC's but nothing that will make you want to drop it.(No NTR) I'll also would like to apologize for my grammar, I'm still learning so please bear with it in the meantime, and if you feel like it, help me to improve it by leaving a commentary. I feel like I left behind something, but I'm new to this so this is it. Thank you for reading this story, if you feel like it, support it as it would help me greatly! Also, in the future If have enough support I will try to draw a few important chapters of the novel, like webtoon or something like that. Chausito!