Review Detail of Sigheti in Marie

While the author greatly succeeds in creating a protagonist that is both charming and sympathetic, I have some problems in genuinely sympathising with other characters as they seem unlifelike. I would like to see some more personality on their account. Furthermore, I must confess that the grammar and vocabulary weren’t that good, but I sincerely believe that such a thing can only develop over time given practice. I am certainly no stranger to this myself, and do not wish to dissuade you by telling you that this point is rather lacking. Overall, I believe that this story has some real potential and that it deserves praise. I wish you all the best and a lot of fun continuing your story.