Review Detail of Ptitkactus in The Hard Bits
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I lost interest in your story after his disfiguration... I tryed to read until the diagon alley part, but the dtory make less and less sense... The had a great potential , but it's all wasted be your plot and execution :( I honestly can't find positive point to your story(the first couples of chapters maybe)
The Hard Bits
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My story is a slow burn, meaning that this will take a while to unlock some of the questions you have or things you want to see. Plot wise, everything has been planned out and will be explained in time and actually make sense (not just a twist). But I do apologize if this isn't your style. Happy reading!