Review Detail of Tonyorobsky in Trashed Work [3]
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Protagonist is a dumb*ss. Too naive and trusting despite his bad life. Still a pushover despite his new strength. And still a sh*tty gamer, who failed to learn from his mistakes. And he leveled up to a ridiculous extent by killing... lv1 slimes. Unclear system when it comes to damage received, seemingly following the author whims instead of logic. Wants to dominate women, yet is considered very pure... Could be better.
Trashed Work [3]
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Thanks for the opinion and criticism. As I am still developing as an author, there's nothing I can do but improve myself. No matter, I'll do my best to improve my shut-in virgin Zeid. If you find the story unsatisfactory for your taste, feel free to drop it. Besides, if the story could run better, you could just pick it up.
I just don’t like naive, overly trusting and pushover characters when they should know better. I barely tolerate the ones who don’t know any better. I believe someone who was bad should have wizened and toughened up after getting a second chance at life. I also didn’t like that he was considered pure. Friendly (or something similar, not harming without provocation)? Yes. Well, you’re a beginner, and I’m dropping it yet.
Twizzyyyyyy:Thanks for the opinion and criticism. As I am still developing as an author, there's nothing I can do but improve myself. No matter, I'll do my best to improve my shut-in virgin Zeid. If you find the story unsatisfactory for your taste, feel free to drop it. Besides, if the story could run better, you could just pick it up.