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Alisha10onten
Alisha10ontenLv145yr
2020-03-27 22:06

Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? 😀 love it 😍

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Heavensprig
HeavensprigLv13

I’ve read up to chapter 60 and I think the summary is really misleading. She’s NOT some sex doll. It’s more like: A sickly girl wakes up after a heart transplant and finds herself in the body of RK company’s most advanced robot. This robot was built as a personal companion for their CEO (who she has her first crush on when she was sick) but is really meant as a nursing robot for his grandfather. His friend Ace added some silly features for her because he was worried about his friend ( the ability to have ‘companionship’ and a fluffy fox tail which he takes off as soon as he sees her 😂😂) being single. So don’t even worry, it’s not about a sexual story that revolves around ‘primitive interactions’... it’s actually VERY heartwarming where they develop REAL feelings slowly for one another. MC is scared and happy to be a robot but is trying to do her best with her situation. MC is very sweet and cutely naive in a way that makes sense and isn’t overly mushy. The CEO is appropriately stern but not heartless and has a real gentle side. Their interactions make a genuine love story and a refreshing and innovative twist. The plot develops really well and is very smooth with their interactions as well as the story and characters. There’s no forced scenes with face slapping and trashy girls who chase the CEO. It all develops in a natural yet complex (she’s a robot it has to be kinda complicated) way. Its not a cut and paste plot with cringed scenes. All heartwarming and natural with interesting scenarios. Reminds me of the little mermaid with her finding a whole new world with a body she’s unfamiliar with and a guy she has feeling she’d helping her. The translation quality is easily read and has no errors that I’ve seen. And chapters aren’t short!!! Not a spoiler since you find out really early in the book: Another misleading thing is that She’s not actually dead in real life, her soul is just occupying the robot. So hope for the future! I would definitely recommend reading!

Warriorwoman
WarriorwomanLv2

Plot: a woman who had a heart disease got turned to a sex doll. It turns out she was shes also made in her crushes company or so. Review:im currently in chapter 8 so my review isbt as detailed. I picked this book mostly because of its sci fi genre bc the fl stories re mostly contemporary romance. The female lead is soft spoken, easily gets shy and cute. She isn't ur usual smart and mentally strong typa girl but atleast in terms of physical strength she got it. But unfortunately doesnt like to use it at least for now. Its different from the usual entertainment cliché we always get that already makes me give it a mark. The chapters re long and the story development is kinda slow. But it's still ok to read id u want something light hearted. The male lead isn't surprisingly a stone face or pervert. He atleast shows anger, frustration and hes pretty considerate if u will ask me. He quite serious with his work although he sometimes unintentionally scares the fl mainly bc I dont think he knows she was a human before. Theres mystery on how she got turned into a robot in the first place. Mind my review isnt well detailed bc I'm still in chapter 8 but when im done I might give a gud and detailed review. Pros: different story line, scifi, robots, mystery, cute side characters, a normal ml (when I say normal I mean someone that isnt ur usual ml in webtoon), chapters re long, good translation quality and a cute fl. Cons: too slow paced, a little confusing, meek fl (some might like the fl some might not), not enough info about the world background, not enough sci fi and it also lacks something that keeps making me come back for more. Conclusion: its ok I guess. Hopefully we see a gud character development on everyone

Shasha_Pierre
Shasha_PierreLv2
AsherGirl
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