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bellanight5600
bellanight5600Lv34yr
2020-04-21 03:14

In the future, the story will play with your heart & emotion. So I decided to MTL this story since I was interested in it and I looked at how many chapters it had and it was a lot. I only read the finale chapter and the extras and it was heavy in my heart. Will Li Beinian & Mu Xichen get their happy ending the answer to that is YES. One scene that was gut retching was when Xichen dream of Beinian past and you see all the emotions he felt watching Beinian get beaten up, his kids getting rip from the womb and he couldn't do anything except watch all of this unfold. That was truly disgusting and heartbreaking. * They thought she was only pregnant with twins but nope she was having triplets. I think Xichen for-sees it when dreaming about Beinian past but nobody believed him. Will Mu Donglin & Lin Kerou get their retribution and the answer to that is YES. At the end Donglin is sentence to the death penalty and Kerou commit suicide. Did I feel for them? Yes I did. While Donglin awaits his death Kerou is the only one who visit him. She pleads that he has to hold on since she is pregnant with his child and she will find a solution to get him out of jail. Donglin knows that his end is coming he says to her " Find a good man that will love you and be happy". At this point Kerou is mentally and physical unstable she says to him he can't die he has to see his son grow up. Did they deserve karma? Yes, but it was really sad seeing this scene. In the end Donglin knows that he was selfish and he deserved this. Before he gets executed Kerou said to him,"Tell me that you love me say those three words" but Donglin doesn't say anything and then he gets killed. Love, Greed, and Jealousy in a human being is a terrifying thing. If Donglin and Kerou ever get reborn I hope they never ever remember their past and i don't ever want them to meet. I hope they have a happy life. Sorry for my bad grammars. I really wanted to write a review. Overall the story was good!

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LilMe
LilMeLv11

Thank you 👍👍

Fleurloving
FleurlovingLv14

Thanks for the future scenes.. It gives me hope and wanting to read it more.

Vividly_Dawn
Vividly_DawnLv14

Where to read the mtl?

bellanight5600
bellanight5600Lv3

This is link to the novel https://***.69shu.com/txt/28263.htm

Vividly_Dawn:Where to read the mtl?
janzsamuel
janzsamuelLv5

Cant find it

bellanight5600
bellanight5600Lv3

You can copy and paste the original title and search for it on the web

janzsamuel:Cant find it
bellanight5600
bellanight5600Lv3

隐婚99天:首席请矜持

bellanight5600:You can copy and paste the original title and search for it on the web
janzsamuel
janzsamuelLv5

Wrong link.. cnt find it

bellanight5600:This is link to the novel https://***.69shu.com/txt/28263.htm
janzsamuel
janzsamuelLv5

Ive tried many times cant find it

bellanight5600
bellanight5600Lv3

隐婚99天:首席请矜持

janzsamuel:Ive tried many times cant find it
Bluesang
BluesangLv4

Cant copy it🥺

bellanight5600:隐婚99天:首席请矜持
Bluesang
BluesangLv4

Can you translate it to English? The title? Please🤧🥺

bellanight5600:隐婚99天:首席请矜持
bellanight5600
bellanight5600Lv3

https://m.xbiquge.cc/book_24392/

Bluesang:Can you translate it to English? The title? Please🤧🥺
Bluesang
BluesangLv4

Thank you so much 🥺💖

bellanight5600:https://m.xbiquge.cc/book_24392/
Gwenivea
GweniveaLv6

Thank you for this reveal. I like to know where I'm headed so I can prepare👍🏾

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Pudor
PudorLv6
ericawinget
ericawingetLv4
anon88
anon88Lv6

This is a review of the first forty chapters. The female lead (Li Beinian) is a typical good girl who was wronged and then reborn with a thirst for revenge and the dream of becoming an A-List actress. Unlike some lead characters, she doesn’t know all of the people who hurt her or at least the extent of their actions that culminated with her and her children’s death. She begins by cooperating with the male lead (Mu Xichen) to thwart her evil stepsister’s plan to humiliate her. Along with the evil stepsister are the usual suspects: self centered capitalist father, evil stepmother, and childhood fiancé who is in love with an evil woman. The face slapping begins a few minutes after her rebirth with Niannian verbally attacked her newly found birth family. The final boss villains ( Mu Donglin and Kerou) have barely been mentioned by this point in the story. Overall, the story is predictable and is starting to get slow paced. In general, there are no glaring grammar errors and transitions between scenes are well done. While the story is smooth to read, filler chapters have already started to pop-up. I expect even more filler chapters to appear as this is a 1,000+ chapter story. The only other complaint I have with this novel is that the characters are one dimensional or schizophrenic. The stepsister/stepmother pair are 1 dimensional. The female lead’s character is inconsistent. From how she describes herself in her first life she went from a tough high EQ tomboy martial arts wiz to a quiet naive push over after being reunited with her birth family at 19 years of age. After her rebirth, Niannian becomes a sarcastic loner she-devil. The characters change would make more sense if the female lead had transmigrated instead. If you are willing to invest a lot of time into a face slapping rebirth story.....this story will satisfy your cravings.

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