I really love this story. I don't leave reviews often, but when I do it is because I really want to support the author. In my honest opinion the reason this story died out in popularity is because some people don't like the development and the fact that EVERTYTHING BAD seems to happen to JayB. Still, it is a very good story. And I am still waiting patiently for the mistery girls release.
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LIKEIn popularity. I mean it is in every single ranking, but the placement has lowered by quite some numbers. It is the difference between pleasing everyone and writing a story you are satisfied with. This is the problem with uploading chapter by chapter and is also the best of it. Some people will hate things and some love, but you know you did good or bad when everyone loves it and when everyone hates it.
Doxi:Really? This died out? I see... This is a new perspective...
Alright. Better wrap this up fast then. I just lost my morale. Hahahaha
GabrielRott:In popularity. I mean it is in every single ranking, but the placement has lowered by quite some numbers. It is the difference between pleasing everyone and writing a story you are satisfied with. This is the problem with uploading chapter by chapter and is also the best of it. Some people will hate things and some love, but you know you did good or bad when everyone loves it and when everyone hates it.
Please don't! Man you story was around in the rankings by chapter 20, mine is at chapter 19 and I can't even catch a glimpse of it. Just don't focus on that aspect. I mean if you write to be popular and not to have people enjoy what you write, you just shouldn't write. Even Harry Potter or Tolkien go down the popularity rankings with time. But the legacy they left behind will always be there. Besides, your story is very good, if we ignore the fact that JayB seems to be suffering because you hate him and the mistery girl is just a full on tease to us, which kinda makes me wanna hate you. But still, awesome work, please keep it up.
Doxi:Alright. Better wrap this up fast then. I just lost my morale. Hahahaha
Alright. If you say so
GabrielRott:Please don't! Man you story was around in the rankings by chapter 20, mine is at chapter 19 and I can't even catch a glimpse of it. Just don't focus on that aspect. I mean if you write to be popular and not to have people enjoy what you write, you just shouldn't write. Even Harry Potter or Tolkien go down the popularity rankings with time. But the legacy they left behind will always be there. Besides, your story is very good, if we ignore the fact that JayB seems to be suffering because you hate him and the mistery girl is just a full on tease to us, which kinda makes me wanna hate you. But still, awesome work, please keep it up.