Review Detail of Nathair_Insint in Nameless Story: The Fool

This is very well done. However, the first few chapters are very confusing, I have absolutely no idea what is going on. Also, the English is imperfect, there are quite a few mistakes -though not enough to make it hard to read/understand. I personally copy all of my chapters into a Google doc, the squiggly blue lines should help show grammatical mistakes if you use this method.