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Ha! I enjoy all of your chapters Biako, this one is no different. I hope that you'll continue to get better because things would be a lot more boring without your writing.And as I said, I'm pretty sure that the biakogan11 address doesn't work. I'd wager that I'm not the only one who got turned around by that. Might be that if you corrected it to the biakogan100 address others would be able to help out.
I assure you, compared to the difficulty of shearing through even raw meat with a knife, self-harming is far more difficult than it should be.
I'm really interested to see how Shen Bao and Many Hao's relationship ends up in the future. It kind of seems like they might end up fighting over the destruction of the planet because of Shen Bao's presence. At the same time, Meng Hao's new power and vendetta against the fire king seem like they might be setting up a way for him to get axed without the fire key being lost
Ah, the five Ds. Dodge, Duck, Dip, Dive, and Dodge.
I suppose that the Three Thousand Soul Immolation Flag just doesn't have the same ring to it.
Another demon lawyer, huh Biako? Should be fun.
Just tell Manohar that he failed to identify something and he'll blow the whole thing wide open for you.
Beating*
I'm just really unsure which one is more likely to die. I mean Orion is a decorated archmage and mage knight, but Jirni is Jirni.
Personally, I'm hoping that he'll leave them just a little off so that they reunite in a later scene. Only for one to realise that the other has been replaced with a shapeshifter.
Truly, a hero for the common man. Doing what we've always dreamed to.
hung*
-to the library for more." Apparently Webnovel has some issues with length.
I'm very interested in how you'll do this and I guess I hope that you'll pull some subversion like you did with PGH. It always seems weird to me that after learning the "always a bigger fish" lesson and being destroyed utterly, the protagonists of these stories always just go with trying to amass more power. I think it would be really interesting to see a protagonist who actually pushes humanity in another direction. Instead of playing by the rules of a game where our race is disadvantaged, why not push them towards scientific development using the new resources. Or search for a separate system of magic where humanity isn't so disadvantaged. Regardless, I'll be following along with interest and please don't be put off by the preceding rant. I'm pretty sure that I'd still enjoy your novels even if they used every cliche in the book and went back to the library for more.
So, he enters a spatial sheet where everything is in the direction he wants to go to the distance he wants to go. Makes sense, but if he returns to the same spatial sheet then won't he be back where he started as he'll move the exact same distance in reverse?
String?