Review Detail of DriedSnug in Legacy of the Multiverse
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I have a saying if you are doing a fanfic you already have the world building is up to you what you do with it. Main character- not developed -1 The story feels really rush -1 Character are so flat that it makes me believe that planet earth is flat and not a sphere -1 The beginning was somewhat good 1 There is barely any dialogue -1 Okay we start whit a 5 we calculate everything and our final score is đ„ a [2]. This is complete wish fulfillment fanfic. Ps: my real score is a [2] not a 2.2 just in case I hate decimales.
Legacy of the Multiverse
Kazru
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The mc got nerfed bro development rushed and no advanvement about the real story author said that mc will build up his godhood in marvel but from the view of it it's not happening cause of 1. Asuna's soul is abducted by random lower god which happens mostly in cultivation novels 2. Another cultivation type mc 3. Can't stand that at all about abducting the heroine stuff because what's the use of it if in the end they will see each other or something typical wuxia xianxia type of author always rooting for kidnapping and stuff.
The mc got nerfed bro development rushed and no advanvement about the real story author said that mc will build up his godhood in marvel but from the view of it it's not happening cause of 1. Asuna's soul is abducted by random lower god which happens mostly in cultivation novels 2. Another cultivation type mc 3. Can't stand that at all about abducting the heroine stuff because what's the use of it if in the end they will see each other or something typical wuxia xianxia type of author always rooting for kidnapping and stuff.
This is what I call forcing the plot, and as long this continue it will be like going down the rabbit hole. In the end not gonna even bother to continue to read this story, if a story doesnât have a good foundation, is bound to come crashing down like a house of cards.
DragonGod999x:The mc got nerfed bro development rushed and no advanvement about the real story author said that mc will build up his godhood in marvel but from the view of it it's not happening cause of 1. Asuna's soul is abducted by random lower god which happens mostly in cultivation novels 2. Another cultivation type mc 3. Can't stand that at all about abducting the heroine stuff because what's the use of it if in the end they will see each other or something typical wuxia xianxia type of author always rooting for kidnapping and stuff.