Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in Legacy of the Multiverse
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This book would’ve been very good if the writing was better . Basically what I’m trying to say is , is that the idea was good but the story was bad. Well in my opinion. Mc bacically goes to worlds then dies then goes to new worlds. Cool right? But nah , the whole story just feels like reading a summary of a book. There is barely any dialogue at all. first SAO world and he gains a bunch of power with his company blah blah blah he likes Asuna blah blah blah they grow old and new world. Goes to naruto world and gets op af but that doesn’t matter because the writing sucks and there’s barely any dialogue between characters. In naruto world towards the end he takes everyones chakra , absorbs Kaguya and is able to modify his body however he likes due to constant experiments and absorbing 10 tails making Kurama a 10 tail as well. I don’t even know wtf is going on most of the time. After that blah blah chooses to reborn again in hp world. But guess what he can’t use any chakra lmfao. So all that power and hard work is literally for nothing. Boring af in hp there’s also no dialogue. I actually fell asleep reading a chapter , wasting my Friday night.... hp world he likes Hermione but he let her go with Ron without even trying to fight for her soooo yeah he’s also a loser . I normally wouldnt care for reviewing about a bad story in my opinion but it’s crazy how everyone in the review section is giving out 5 stars like it’s candy
Legacy of the Multiverse
Kazru
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Lol Nice. Which chapter did you fall sleep in? So I can use it in the future. Yes the novel is weird, Their are no dialogue in most chapters only story is described, personally I blame it on myself being an introvert person why don't really know how to use links as such to make realistic conversation pieces. Well anyway the idea I started the novel was simply based on the fact that I had certain opinion which I wanted to share and discuss with others that's all. Yes MC is always OP as hell in all stories but still stay grounded unlike MC who turn the entire world Up side down with a wave of a hand. As for the MC dying, not taking people from the previous worlds with him to the next, I was actually planning on combining everything before MC starts Marvel which was going to be the main place for the MC to build his godhood legacy in. But anyway, I had fun while writing the novel and I was hoping that other felt this way too. Sorry for wasting your valuable time. Hope you find something else good to read. Regards Kazru
All **** happened bro the type of the story changed from world travelling and else to cultivation type mc and asuna got together and asuna died but **** happened her soul got taken away and mc didn't know a **** and got nerfed and bla bla bla this is utter **** I say
Angelxcx:Thx for your rewie I saved my time reading this.
Well you describe what I most hate in story so now I really happy that I forst read rewie before I start read.
DragonGod999x:All **** happened bro the type of the story changed from world travelling and else to cultivation type mc and asuna got together and asuna died but **** happened her soul got taken away and mc didn't know a **** and got nerfed and bla bla bla this is utter **** I say