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Well can't really give you 5🌟 only spammer do that. Writing Quality: the writing is good no errors easy to read Stability of Updating: well its new its not been 3 days yet and alreay have 7 chapter but i suggest only release 2 chapter per day or 1 chapter per day or 3 chapter per weak so as to relax sometimes and not to have writers sickness Story Development: in naruto arc or chapter 7 is the best scene or MC done so far being naruto not being soldier for other Character Design: meh you didnt even visualize the apperance of MC on SAO World Background :havung fox summon realm is good addition to existing World Background

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Legacy of the Multiverse

Kazru

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Kazru
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Sorry about the character design thing, First time writing a story so was but confused about how to go about it and ended up completly ignoring it. Lol. Thanks for the support.

Kazru
KazruAuthorKazru

I'm not Chinese nor am Google translating anything. Just simply bad at English Lol

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