I like the that novel is set in the medieval era, we don't have many of that here. Writing quality and grammar is ok. There are a few mistakes here and there but it is still enjoyable. I want to see more progress on the development of the economy, military, and the kingdom. The pace is fine and we are yet introduced to the surrounding areas and kingdoms. More character development would be great as well
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Good morrow my friend. Thank you so much for your constructive comments and taking your time in reading this novel. Yes, indeed I do agree with novels based on medieval times that does not come with harem, system, reincarnation and super OP MC. Even if the storyline was not based entirely on the actual facts of the 15th century, but I try to be as close as possible. There are more new characters along the way, although they only make up just a slight significance in the coming chapters. Sincerely, I do hope you do keep this novel throughout in your library as more interesting events are being unfold. Thank you for your kind support and Happy Holidays. Cheerio.
Economy is being reflected on the 90tb chapter onwards. Likewise with military but I won't be able to add British cannons and culviners into the storyline as it would be only be known only somewhere in 1455 I suppose? As for other developments, even though 90% of Britain's population at that time was uneducated, the plot of having an integrated education system may exist though in its infancy stage. Thank you once again and GBU. Cheers
Thanks for the reply Usually, I would expect it to be bloody and gory like in medieval times where people didn't know about sanitation resulting in the spread of the bubonic plague. People's lifespan expectancy to be no more than young 30s due to constant warfare if you were enlisted in the military and lack of food. Those were dark times. Thanks for the consistent updates and Happy New Year
It was a bit in the gory side but we all have read those so frequently in other novels that it became cliche and not a novelty anymore. Bubonic plague ended way before 1440 but reemerged once more. Its now on The Great Slump because lacking in able bodied men to focus on agriculture but were sent off under King Henry VI army. Decided to have a different approach in this manner so even though the story line is a bit slow, it depicts the whole storyline. (I even had to force myself to dream as if I was one of the character) LOL... I hope you'd stay with this novel and glad to have you on board at https://discord.gg/SFnmXZu. Hope the new title and cover would make it more attractive as the storyline.
