Review Detail of Rey_G in SCP - The Game Console

Item: SCP - The Game Console
Rating: 1.8

Review detail

Rey_GLv12yrRey_G

Low control of the scene, the author constantly writes "Then this happens. Next that happens. Then the man thinks that. Ant then the other man does that." The author has nil knowledge on how realistic interactions feel like, and on how people react to certain things, to the point that war vets have the mindset of five year old children.

SCP - The Game Console

Unholy_Student

Liked it!

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Rey_GLv1Rey_G

Blitzed through it. The grammar gets worse as time goes on. The author is clearly not experienced enough to write a story with billions of different POVS. Bazillions of unrelated and useless "AUTHOR NOTE"s throughout the story makes everything insufferable.

2yr