Wait the Mc and the Mc of the Fan-fiction of - Naruto: Spring's Eyes and this fan-fic kinda gave me the same vibe and the author of that fan fic also said in his introduction that his MC will gonna progress in strength through hard-work, talent and opportunity. This novel however dont have talent but is equalling it throughh hard work. Is the author the same person? And the author - OceanoTurtle also have reviewed this fanfiction with 5 stars just yesterday! Are they the same author?😂 I just got the same vibe between the two and both of them I liked reading.

Good story, I love it not only is it enjouable to read, It also sometimes made me smile at some comedy scenes, I loved your Idea on the Female Protagonist, I think it is a good idea and unique so keep it up. Plus support.

A very good story i love it :) plz don't drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!! .................................................................................................................................................................... ............ .........

The story was really good it is worth the read. HOWEVER, to me this novel has been ruined. The author introduces a reincarnation type figure that utterly destroys everything built/in the story. To me he ruins everything. As soon as he shows up, around that time. It just gradually starts going downhill. I mean everything the author justifies his reasons is the mc is too op etc etc. However, compared to the rest she rly isn't. She doesn't even have ems and I can think of tons of ppl that could destroy her. Another thing for me is I feel that reincarnation dude is just to put everything so it somewhat follows canon in some way. Like the mc makes changes and that other guy makes the "changes" irrelevant and makes it follow back to canon. Granted it happens in different ways. However, at the core it is what he is doing. Overall, im utterly disappointed that a great fanfic to me was ruined by this. Gl to author for future stories.

Nice story but author is trying too hard not make OP MC which bugs me the most! As you see MC has natural talent in learning and can use Fujin jutsu but never uses it and while fighting she can use five element jutsu but only uses her MS which makes her blind.... So much for making M.C nerf. It's like author gave most powerful tool to MC but MC never tried to learn or try to gain insight!!! Which frustrates me to no end.

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Nerfing the main character constantly is the authors favorite pass time At some point he even seals permanently 25% of the chakra of the mc, so don't expect it to get better with time

I'm really enjoying this story but something is really bugging me. Most of the story I've read thus far seems like a rewrite of a gamer story I read on ff.net. I'm not sure if it moves away from that path as there are minor differences that seem to be building up but it doesn't take away from this sense of deja vu. Other than that this is probably one of the most well written stories I've found on webnovel.

this story makes me happy. and sad. and angry. and fuzzy. if you don't hate a certain group of characters by the end of reading this I'd call you weird. if you don't love another group I'd call you crazy. and the world well it's Naruto. a well thought out Naruto. just read it. it's some hours of your life you will never want back and will do so again in a heartbeat.

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