Review Detail of Pragmatico in Risen World

Item: Risen World
Rating: 5

Review detail

PragmaticoLv153yrPragmatico

Great read, story progresses at a steady pace overall. Sometimes it jumps a little forward when needed and goes into great details at others. No major grammar issues and a new twist to an old genre

Risen World

VivitheGreat

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VivitheGreatAuthorVivitheGreat

Yeah I feel the story has to jump every now and then so it doesn't get to complacent. It's slow going, but I still want some interesting things to occur. Glad you're liking it so far.

3yr