Review Detail of Alessandra12345 in Risen World

The stories plot is original and interesting, although there are a few things that could be improved upon, such as grammer and character details. I find that there have been some consistent mistakes like when the author uses sense instead of since or when they use do when it should be due. The author also could describe the characters appearances in more detail because some times I find it hard to picture them. These are the main short comings of the story that i've found but besides that i've found everything else enjoyable such as the personality of the protagonist who is strong and reliable and the plot of the story. The giant monsters are really cool, especially the city bosses. 😎